How to Write in Rhyme, with Author Janet Lawler

Laura chats with author Janet Lawler about creating successful rhyming stories and working with an editor!

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lawler The December, 2009 edition of Children’s Book Insider features a terrific piece on writing in rhyme by author Janet Lawler. Recently, Laura chatted with Janet to learn even more about how to rhyme and also how to work with an editor for maximum success. Have a listen!

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For more information about Janet, go to http://www.janetlawler.com/

Some of Janet’s books:

Tyrannoclaus

If Kisses Were Colors

A Father’s Song

Jon February 28th, 2010 4:15 pm :
Fightin’ Bookworms – downloadhe full transcript of this podcast at http://cbiclubhouse.com/2010/02/full-transcripts-janet-lawler-rachel-rodriguez/
Patricia Meyers March 21st, 2010 7:06 pm :
Hi, I’m Patti from Oak Lawn, IL. I’m overwhelmed by all the technology….and the wealth of information…it’s gonna take me days/weeks to process it all…but I’m glad to be here!
WriterKat April 9th, 2010 9:16 am :
Wow!!! Janet was so generous with her insight into writing in rhyme. How can I get her article in the December 2009 newsletter? I’m a newbie to CBI.

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