Module 8 – Perfect Your Pacing
* Start here: erfect Your Pacing
* Now, do this: Run Your Story Through Laura’s Pacing Checklist
* Next, spend some time with this : A Nifty Exercise to Learn Pacing from Top Writers
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► New Publisher of Boy-Centered Middle Grade Seeks Submissions
► New Agent Seeks Middle Grade and Young Adult Fiction
► 20th Annual Self-Published Book Awards Taking Entries
► Spice Up Your Writing With Tasty Details
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